My routine starts at 6 with a short shower. After this I put on my uniform according to the class schedule, while my mom prepares breakfast. I serve breakfast, brush my teeth, pick up my backpack and go to my school. At the end of the school day I return to my house, I play with my pet and, I change my clothes and lunch. I rest 30 minutes and start doing my homework. In the afternoon after having done my homework game at the play station. In the evening I have dinner, I keep my notebooks and I sleep.
Good job, the only recommendation is to pay attention in the punctuation. After the transition words you need a comma. 9/10
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